Analysis of RAIN ON SPRING DAY (a PANTOUM)



RAIN ON SPRING DAY (a PANTOUM)
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I am here, you are there, Our households are in square
How to get the matter clear, I am here and you are there
light of wisdom spreads widely through the skilled diffusion
Our lives are real and actual not based on baseless illusion

come here or call me there to remove the deadly confusion
light of wisdom spreads widely through the skilled diffusion
better it is if we sort out our life's problems with love inclusion
they are not the difficult but easy routine of activities seclusion

You do what is necessary to do and I will religiously follow you
I will do the practical things left- right as are expected by you
light of wisdom spreads widely through the skilled diffusion
Our lives are real and actual not based on baseless illusion

So come here soon or call me there, I can't wait now anymore
Time is priceless jewel, let us fit it in our crowns of daily head
Without losing a minute, relish our remainder life in cozy bed
We are not so old honey and neither too young nor yet unwed.

~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~


Scheme x aaBB bBbb ccBB xddd x
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 1 111111101101 11101011110111 1110110101010 10111010011110010 111111101010010 1110110101010 101111111011011010 11101001100110100010 1111100110110100101 11101001111101011 1110110101010 10111010011110010 11111111111101 111010111101011101 0110010101001010101 1111110010111101 110
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,058
Words 195
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 44
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 139
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted on May 18, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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