Analysis of Pumpkin Grin



I know there’s nothing I can whisper
that the night won’t understand,
as her blushing hazel moon
floats up the sapphire command.
October listens for the fall in me,
for now she’s everywhere I am,
smiling, tricking me, to temp my soul
by any way she can.

She shadows mischief in the season
swirling fumes of amber fright.
Her spices brew into a current
flicking the jack-o-lantern light.
I breathe her potions in,
and out-- the romance she invites,
I taste her name, cold, deep, October
in the essence of the night.

Now I’m craving all the flavors
of her secret, glowing dim.
Although the first kiss leaves me satisfied
I lean in for more and then
I am smitten, I am spellbound
by the magic sweeping in.
Thawed by the embers of October
and her seductive pumpkin grin.


Scheme ABXBXXXX XCXCDXAC XXXXXDAD
Poetic Form
Metre 111101110 101101 1010101 11010001 0101010101 1111011 101011111 110111 11100010 1011101 010101010 10011101 110100 01001101 110111010 0010101 11101010 1010101 10111110 1101101 1110111 1010100 110101010 00010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 761
Words 140
Sentences 9
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 200
Words per stanza (avg) 46
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jana Satterlund

I wrote my first poem at the age of 10. Although I enjoyed reading and writing poetry, I didn't truly appreciate it until a few years ago. At 21 I started really writing for myself as a release. It has surely become my escape, my late night ritual, my confession. I feel honored to be a part of this community where so many talented poets come together. I appreciate any sentiment and am elated at the opportunity to comment on so many beautiful pieces! more…

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