Analysis of Please lead us

Karolina Marszałkowska 1993 (Gdańsk)



Leading the ocean to rest on a beach
And forest to give creatures some shade
With songs leading the wildest of beasts
With songs no one has ever made

Showing the easiest way to the gale
And warming up winds from deepest colds
Setting a meeting of darkness and day
Leading the life lines with simplest songs

Only we are cursed to be left
Without their guidence for who knows how long
Only and only when you'll talk with death
Maybe it will sing you a song


Scheme XAXA XXXX XBXB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 1001011101 010111011 111001011 11111101 1001001101 010111101 1001011001 100111101 10111111 011111111 1001011111 10111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 443
Words 87
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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