Analysis of Pink Pyramids



Well gotta go now
Was one time wishing
The world would slow down
Wait for you and me

That's okay time to catch
A train west bound to the stack
All the way to Albuquerque
Longing for the Spectacular

Just almost don't want to know
How much things will have changed
Her venacular pueblos layed on
Paved roads from canyon walls

Mountains packed with ice slush cold
Rainbow hues against skies so blue
Lungs inflated faces kissed by sun shaded
In every titration of brown and copper brew

Hard to know what to expect
Her humans have doubled
Since last I went and what of the Indians drinking
Effluent water now from progress's rubble.

A jewel trampled on might
Be the fate I find when I finally
Hit I- twenty five but if I time it
Just right there'll be balloons lit high.

Will there be a place for me
A job, a humble new beginning
Can't know, but maybe beats the alone
I have in a crowded room at home.


Scheme XAXB XXBX XXXX XCXC XXAX XBXX BAXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 11110 01111 11101 11111 0111101 10111000 10100100 111111 111111 01111 111101 1011111 1101111 10101011110 01001110101 1111101 010110 1111011010010 1001011110 0101011 1011111100 1110111111 111010111 1110111 010101010 111101001 110010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 869
Words 171
Sentences 4
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 102
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on July 07, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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