Analysis of Perfect Me.



Perfect me. I have to be.
I'll cut away the part of me
That hinder my strides
To where I need to be.
To be happy.
To be free.

I'm so scared. And alone.
In a prison I've built.
Out of shame and of guilt.
I thought I was making harmony,
A beautiful symphony,

But really I'm destroying me,
Until there's nothing left of me.


Scheme AAXAAA XBBAA AA
Poetic Form
Metre 0111111 11010111 11011 111111 1110 111 111001 001011 111011 111110100 0100100 11010101 01110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 308
Words 65
Sentences 10
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 2
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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amy elizabeth hand

I have always loved writing, all types, but especially in partnership with my music. I sing and write melodies for the words which I create. I am passionate about this. Hopefully, someday it will all pay off. Until then, I will enjoy this for what it is. more…

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