Analysis of Our "Disemba"



An African twelfth month!
Salons overflow with women;
Wigs, weavons & make-up are sold out.
Broke boyfriends cook up quarrels
To avoid footing Cupid's Christmas bills.
Townspeople head home to villages
But some arrive in big boxes.

An African twelfth month!!
No Santa nor reindeers, just Father Christmas.
He's so friendly, little children cry
Yet they'll quickly queue up for more gifts.
Kpa! Kpa!! Pow!!! Sparks & song of bangers
Make them squeak & shriek with joy.
Even a Muslim flashes us a merry smile.

An African Christmas!!!
Dust... Drunkeness... Vigils...
Moon... Masquerades... Visits...
Cocks will be spiced & chickened.
Bulls will be sauced & beefened.
You are warmly welcome to our December.

NGENE CHIBUEZE JOHN
(The Light of Africa!!)
thekoboko@live.com


Scheme Axbcxdd Aexxxxx ecxxbx xxx
Poetic Form
Metre 110011 0110110 1111111 111110 101101101 10111100 11010110 110011 1101111010 111010101 111011111 11111110 111111 100101010101 110010 1110 1110 111110 11111 111010110010 111 011100 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 744
Words 123
Sentences 25
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 6, 3
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 147
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted by kingkoboko on May 01, 2011

Modified on May 03, 2023

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