Analysis of One Short Life



I am a child,
covered in jewels
of imagination,
lost in the luxury
of not knowing
what lies ahead.

I am growing up,
fake jewelry loses value,
and I hide from the lies
and beg for salvation,
hoping to plan
and asking the pain to pass.

I am an adult,
refusing the smallest
of my past dreams,
rejecting what,
in my mind,
could never be.

I am sickly, dying
in the arms
of a loved one
though no one
else knows
I was already dead.


Scheme XXABCD XXXAXX XXXXXB CXAAXD
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 10010 10010 100100 1110 1101 11101 11001010 011101 011010 1011 0100111 11101 010010 1111 0101 011 1101 111010 001 1011 111 11 110101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 401
Words 85
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kassandra M. Konecny

Kassandra Konecny is a lover of listening to music, hiking in the mountains, and observing the way people act. She began writing vigorously when she was fourteen and will hopefully never stop. She has had her fair share of trials lately, and tries to encompass nearly every subject there is to study into her writing. Kassandra plans to study creative writing and psychology. She's 17 and currently lives in Utah with her family. Contact her at kassandrakonecny@hotmail.com more…

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