Analysis of Nonexistence



Prove me.
Make me real.
Establish my reality more than a mere effect of your psychosis.
I'm a Chimera.
I'm a Phantasm.
I'm a meager smidgen in your happy sphere of insanity.
Show me how to exist
Outside your eyes.

Senses are subjective.
your ears and eyes may breathe false words
And do not try to touch me:
Your hands often fly
Into surreal worlds
Where you alone can truly be.

Then,
You are naught
but a delusion.
Fake.
Crazy.
Fantastic.

You are a Mirage.
Apparition.
Lie.
Delusion.
Proof of my insanity.
You’ll verify nil
save my foolish nothingness.
You monstrous promise
Of solidity.

I hate you.

Dearest darling,
Most magnificent,
Brilliant boy;
You who promised me life and love and
Pure existence,
Have failed.

and i cant even prove it


Scheme AXBXXAXX XXACXA XXDXAX XDCDAXBBA X XXXXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11 111 01011011010111010 10010 1010 1010100110110100 111101 1111 101010 11011111 0111111 11101 01011 11011101 1 111 10010 1 10 010 11001 010 1 010 1110100 1101 1110100 11010 10100 111 1010 10100 101 111011010 1010 11 0111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 708
Words 131
Sentences 23
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 8, 6, 6, 9, 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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