Analysis of No Title



Four days ago you told me you love me
And thought you were satisfying my desires.
Three days ago I doubted it all and told you so.
I do not stand for liars
For, two days ago, you finally came clean.
You said I was too serious and over-burning my fires.
I didn't want to, but I set you free.
And, you swore, your best friend I will still be.
One day ago, I was sad and felt harmed,
And confused, and abused, by how you had charmed.
Now, today, I had to try to show indifference
To how my heart feels under your influence.
It has not been that long
So, how it went wrong
p*ss a mystery, killing me strong.
So, what has changed while you were gone?
Was my love and support too much to move on?
Did they influence your thinking that I wasn't right?
That you had to reject me as I was to fight
To keep you beside me, and bringing you home?
Were you told to forget me and leave me alone?
Please tell me...help me understand
The sudden desire to not hold my hand.
To not recognize and respond to how much I care.
Suddenly so unaware of which way you want to go:
Lover, friend, or foe?
I am waiting to know.
I still love you so.


Scheme ABCBDBAAEEFFGGGHIJJKLMMNCCCC
Poetic Form
Metre 1101111111 01101001010 1101110110111 1111110 11101110011 1111110001010110 1101111111 0111111111 1101111011 00100111111 1011111110100 11111101100 111111 11111 1101001011 11111101 11100111111 1110011011101 111101111111 11101101011 011101101101 111101 01001011111 111000111111 1001011111111 10111 111011 11111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,105
Words 229
Sentences 21
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 851
Words per stanza (avg) 226
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Submitted on October 15, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jampoet M

I started writing poetry at the age of eleven as a way to express what I couldn't otherwise. My poetry is my 'therapy' of sorts and helps me communicate my every raw emotion. It's funny how so much creativity roots itself in our misery, almost more so than our happiness. Being it so for me, my poetry has more darkness than light most of the time...sometimes I just want to strike a nerve. more…

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