Analysis of New Rose



“NEW ROSE” WITHERED NO MORE..

STARE IF YOU DARE…. MY PEDALS MUST BE HANDLED WITH CARE…

THE SENT FROM MY ESSENCE WOULD BE YOUR ANSWER…(mmmmmm)… FELLING YOUR BREATH NEAR...

THE SHAPE OF MY LONG STEM IS ONE OF A DANCER… BEAUTY RUNS DEEP IN MY SOUL, DANGEROUS ONLY IF MISHANDLED…(whispering…..TOUCH ME SOFTLY)…

THORNS OF POWER...HEART SO TRUE…. STANDING TALL AND BOLD…. REMOVING ME FROM MY PLACE OF PEACE?

FEELING THE WRAP OF YOUR STRENGTH AROUND MY WAITING LENGTH…… DELIGHTFUL…. I’M EXCITED AND NOW READY TO BLOOM…

WITHERED NO MORE… THE STARE YOUR SOUL PRODUCE…. HAS NOW EXPLORED MY INNER BEING…

YOU’VE JUST WIPED AWAY MY PAIN…. REMOVING THE HATRED AND CHAINS…. (SIGH) RELIEF!!! THE PASSIONATE TOUCH….

YOUR HANDS UP AGAINST MY CURVES.. JUST RIGHT… NO ONE WOULD IMAGE I’D EVER DESERVE…

THE LOVE FROM A FRIEND THAT’S ALSO BEEN IN IT’S OWN GARDEN MISHANDLED…. COME STAND BY ME IN A NEW….

LOOKING AND REACHING OUT TO YOU… LOOKING BACK TO SEE YOU’VE ALWAYS BEEN THERE FOR ME….

THE STARS ARE SHINING AGAINST OUR ROSE PEDALS….YOU NOW WRAPPING YOUR LEAF AROUND MY SPINE..

OUR BASE NOW INLINE WITH TIME AND TOGETHERNESS…(TIME TO WATER) ME WITH YOUR LIQUID WORDS…

ENTWINING IN THE SOIL BENEATH US…. DEFINING TRUE FRIENDSHIP….I AM NOW READY TO BE PLACED IN A NEW SUNNY PLACE…

IF YOU LEAVE ME, WILL YOU PROMISE TO COME BACK?? WAITING DESPERATELY ON THE DAY YOU RETURN MY WAY…. (STAYING STRONG) NOW ALL ALONE…

LEAVING CANDLE LIGHTS IN MY PATH…. LETTING YOU DO THE MATH… ALWAYS BEING YOUR SUNSHINE TO BRING YOU BACK TO ME…. (MMMMM) THE WIND BLOWS YOUR TOUCH TO ME EACH NIGHT..

MAKING ME LOOSE CONTROL…. THE COOLNESS OF THE NIGHT AIR, (AAAWW). PADDLES FEELING BARE….. NOT MISSING ONE SPOT… (HEARING A VOICE) I’M BACK!! LOOKING OUT INTO THE NIGHT….

PADDLES SHINING SO BRIGHT…. GROWING INTO EACH OTHER ALL NIGHT LONG…. PROMISING EACH OTHER THAT THIS WILL LAST 4-EVER…. AND EVER…. AND EVER…GROWING INTO EACH OTHERS BEING…

MAKING A NEW CREATION OF BEAUTIFUL SONGS…. WITHERED NO MORE…


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Poetic Form
Metre 111011 1111110111011 01111011110110111 01111111101010110111001010101001110 1111110101010111111 10011110111010101010011011 1011011101110111010 11101110100100110101001 1110111111111011001 011011101011100101111001 1001011110111111111 0111001101101110110111 1011111001001110111101 100101101011011110111001101 11111110111101000101101111011101 10101011101101110111111111011111111 1011010101011110101110111001111010101 1010111001110111100110111110010010100111010 1001010110011011
Characters 2,072
Words 342
Sentences 38
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 79
Words per line (avg) 18
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on September 24, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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