New Rose



“NEW ROSE” WITHERED NO MORE..

STARE IF YOU DARE…. MY PEDALS MUST BE HANDLED WITH CARE…

THE SENT FROM MY ESSENCE WOULD BE YOUR ANSWER…(mmmmmm)… FELLING YOUR BREATH NEAR...

THE SHAPE OF MY LONG STEM IS ONE OF A DANCER… BEAUTY RUNS DEEP IN MY SOUL, DANGEROUS ONLY IF MISHANDLED…(whispering…..TOUCH ME SOFTLY)…

THORNS OF POWER...HEART SO TRUE…. STANDING TALL AND BOLD…. REMOVING ME FROM MY PLACE OF PEACE?

FEELING THE WRAP OF YOUR STRENGTH AROUND MY WAITING LENGTH…… DELIGHTFUL…. I’M EXCITED AND NOW READY TO BLOOM…

WITHERED NO MORE… THE STARE YOUR SOUL PRODUCE…. HAS NOW EXPLORED MY INNER BEING…

YOU’VE JUST WIPED AWAY MY PAIN…. REMOVING THE HATRED AND CHAINS…. (SIGH) RELIEF!!! THE PASSIONATE TOUCH….

YOUR HANDS UP AGAINST MY CURVES.. JUST RIGHT… NO ONE WOULD IMAGE I’D EVER DESERVE…

THE LOVE FROM A FRIEND THAT’S ALSO BEEN IN IT’S OWN GARDEN MISHANDLED…. COME STAND BY ME IN A NEW….

LOOKING AND REACHING OUT TO YOU… LOOKING BACK TO SEE YOU’VE ALWAYS BEEN THERE FOR ME….

THE STARS ARE SHINING AGAINST OUR ROSE PEDALS….YOU NOW WRAPPING YOUR LEAF AROUND MY SPINE..

OUR BASE NOW INLINE WITH TIME AND TOGETHERNESS…(TIME TO WATER) ME WITH YOUR LIQUID WORDS…

ENTWINING IN THE SOIL BENEATH US…. DEFINING TRUE FRIENDSHIP….I AM NOW READY TO BE PLACED IN A NEW SUNNY PLACE…

IF YOU LEAVE ME, WILL YOU PROMISE TO COME BACK?? WAITING DESPERATELY ON THE DAY YOU RETURN MY WAY…. (STAYING STRONG) NOW ALL ALONE…

LEAVING CANDLE LIGHTS IN MY PATH…. LETTING YOU DO THE MATH… ALWAYS BEING YOUR SUNSHINE TO BRING YOU BACK TO ME…. (MMMMM) THE WIND BLOWS YOUR TOUCH TO ME EACH NIGHT..

MAKING ME LOOSE CONTROL…. THE COOLNESS OF THE NIGHT AIR, (AAAWW). PADDLES FEELING BARE….. NOT MISSING ONE SPOT… (HEARING A VOICE) I’M BACK!! LOOKING OUT INTO THE NIGHT….

PADDLES SHINING SO BRIGHT…. GROWING INTO EACH OTHER ALL NIGHT LONG…. PROMISING EACH OTHER THAT THIS WILL LAST 4-EVER…. AND EVER…. AND EVER…GROWING INTO EACH OTHERS BEING…

MAKING A NEW CREATION OF BEAUTIFUL SONGS…. WITHERED NO MORE…

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Submitted on September 24, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme A X X B X X C X X X B X X X X D D C A
Characters 2,072
Words 342
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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