Analysis of My Own Rains
I'm a broken heart, healing on my own.
Called out for help but I found myself alone.
If it is too much pride that I refuse to bend
expectations so high, I've no friend.
so I'm soaked wet in this strongs rains,
Inflicted wounds on, I'm full of pains.
You're a broken heart, healing and being helped.
Reasons to move on, you see all of them.
Beautiful places to see, charm to make hearts melt.
Smiles are offered to you if you'd appreciate them.
but I know you are still seeking shelter from your rains
that still continue to remind you of your past pains.
I want to be there for you, I want to be that shelter
but just like you, I badly need some strong shelter.
I want to find you and catch you dry from this storm,
but how can I if I've been soaked from where I came from?
you got your rains and I got my own rains.
you got your pains and I got my own pains..
I realized that a broken heart can't heal another broken heart.
They'd find cure soon but first, they must find its missing part
not from anyone else or from the people who tore them apart,
but from themselves because that's how the mending starts.
I want to be there and save you from where you are,
but how can I if I can't even save myself from my own war?
but Someday, it'll all be alright for you and me.
Soon, I hope you and I meet, already healed.
from our own pains,
from our own rains.
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Metre | 1010110111 1111111101 111111110111 01011111 11110111 010111111 10101100101 1011111111 100101111111 111011110101 1111111010111 1101010111111 11111111111110 111111011110 111110111111 1111111111111 1111011111 1111011111 1101010111010101 1111111111101 111011101011101 110101110101 111110111111 111111110111111 11101111101 11110110101 11011 11011 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,328 |
Words | 270 |
Sentences | 19 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 6, 6, 6, 4 |
Lines Amount | 28 |
Letters per line (avg) | 37 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 207 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 54 |
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Submitted on August 31, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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