Analysis of My Mother



My mother's sleep is a
long hated diary.
Loneliness is the
cause of her nightmares.

My father was selfish
with his needs
but gracious with his wants,
my mother's anger
is deflated by her mistakes.

She smiles at the
soiled sweetness of her
story, her carelessness is
distracted from her truth,
her punishment is her steps
drifting toward the same door.

My father's care is
sequestered
by his lack of loving.
My mother needing his love,
and my father never willing
to let it go from his side.


Scheme AXAX XXXBX ABCXXX CXDXDX
Poetic Form
Metre 110110 110100 10010 1101 110110 111 110111 11010 10101001 1110 11010 1001001 010101 0100101 1001011 11011 010 111110 1101011 01101010 1111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 470
Words 88
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 6, 6
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 20, 2023

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