Analysis of My Disease



this certain disease...
takes control...
my every move..
thinks my every thought...
keeps me pacing around...
back and forth...
looking for more...
figuring out a way...
to just walk away from it...
but it keeps calling me...
telling me to come back...
everytime somebody mentions you...
i start rubbing my face...
fiending like a crackhead...
wanting more and more...
you're just like that other four letter word...
but i can't roll you up and smoke you...
i get high everytime somebody mentions you...
or when i think of someone or it reminds me of them...
why are you doing this to me...
i can't take it anymore...
i wanna be tha one in control...
i need to find a cure for this disease called love...


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMDGNLLOJGBP
Poetic Form
Metre 11001 101 11001 111001 111001 101 1011 100101 1110111 111101 101111 1010101 111011 1101 10101 1111101101 111111011 1111010101 1111111101111 11110111 111101 110111001 111101110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 682
Words 125
Sentences 23
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 509
Words per stanza (avg) 125
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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