Analysis of Mother'S last whisper



MOTHER'S LAST WHISPER

Your time gradually flies
From the mud and dust beginning
You want to come HOME

But even we try to add memorable moments
We can't hold your breathing and life
Because every event has finish line
Because every walk there is a Last Rest

Only we can do is to grasp
To seize every instance of our attachments
To remember the caress how you nurtured us.
To remember the pain and joy of our bonding and binding

All the bliss of honor and nimbus of happiness
You greatly and wholly share
Faucet of tears fell
River of sweat flowed
Just make us to survive,
To shine, and  to reach the peak of  our dreams

You make yourself as a blockade
Of   all despises and scorns
Covering us with your humility and honesty
You showered us with your tender love, affection and endearment.

Thank you to all sacrifices
You have done to us
Thank you to good values, aspiration and hope
That you engraved to our being
Thank you for your noble dedication
That make us a molded and refined person.

But my mother whisper her simple request
“To let her last breathe
her last eyes open,
her last words,

To be with  the GARDEN walking with GOD”


Scheme X XAX BXXC XBDA DXXXXX XXXX XDXAEE CXEX X
Poetic Form
Metre 10110 1110001 10101010 11111 1101111100010 11111001 01100011101 01100111011 10111111 1110010110010 101000111101 1010010111010010 1011100101100 1100101 10111 10111 111101 11011011101 1101101 1101001 10011101000100 1101111010100010 1111100 11111 11111001001 110111010 111110010 11101000110 11101001001 11011 01110 011 1110101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,105
Words 210
Sentences 4
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 4, 4, 6, 4, 6, 4, 1
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on July 11, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Herbert Guitang

I started making poems when I was in high school. Creativity and Imagination develop every poem I do. The level of our maturity in poetry brings us self happiness and soar us in all kinds of being and life. I studied Music Composition in University of the Philippines. Through this, it spreads more deepness and bliss to my art and poetry. I believe, INSPIRATION comes to all things within and outside us. INSPIRATION that unifies and serve as LIFE to our being. Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/bongherbert.guitang Twitter: https://twitter.com/herb3127 more…

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