Analysis of More concentrate with insight; higher you may fly



I had a lovely night; spent in search of Lord
To enjoy more; was sailing on spiritual boat
As thoughts focus on; divine window unlock
If bless on; will show you divine place to dock

It's very slow in pace; but will take you to space
It's a divine bounty; no need to be in any race
Practice but is not your right; comes with grace
Continue spiritual search; but do not hard press

When bless; takes to journey of million of miles
Can see; who were you; who will be; in your files
More concentrate with insight; higher you may fly
Practice hard; it base on mercy of divine desire

Think; close; but still far away; thousands of miles
It's a very enjoyable spiritual journey in novel style
Will make more humble; towards divine to incline
It's a powerful divine vehicle; spiritually to thrive

Will find qualities of prophets in; if blink the light
As spiritual spark touch heart; make you to fly
This is your eternal place to live; a permanent life
You hit your destiny; arrived at paradise of delight


Scheme XXAA BBBX CCDX CXXX EDXE
Poetic Form
Metre 11010110111 1011110110001 11101011001 11111101111 110101111111 10011011110101 1011111111 0101000111111 11111011011 11101111011 1101110111 10111110101010 11111011011 101001001000100101 111100101101 10100011001000011 1110011001101 110001111111 11101011101001 11110001110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 977
Words 183
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 157
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Submitted on September 27, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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