Analysis of Moma's Bench



I visited my old home in Rum Gully
 and I sat on Moma's bench today.
 Dusty, old, falling apart~
 but it seems like just yesterday:

Moma peeling tomatoes to can~
 I am sitting there too.
 Moma peeling as I ate
 and smiling as I chewed.

~~~ ~ ~~

Memories of that old bench
 grow sweeter each day.
 In daydreams I see Moma~
 ' seems like just yesterday.


Scheme XAXA XXXX XAXA
Poetic Form
Metre 11001110110 011110101 1011001 1111110 101001011 111011 1010111 010111 1 1001111 11011 011110 11110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 342
Words 67
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 1, 4
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on July 01, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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