Analysis of Melting into Tears.....



I'm torn between my life and that of my beloved..

You have used my emotions...I wonder how

You have overtaken the voice of your conscience,

...
To make the best use of my fidelity...

Always loved you for the beauty of your soul

Until I found out the ugly truth it turned out to be

I've been used for the pleasure from your life

And have been deserted, drowned in agony

I'm hurt...you are too good for your own life;

Unbearable pain, you have no faintest idea about

Is what I feel...as you step up on my tainted heart

The pain within overpowers me, beneath your feet...

Melts my heart.. as it holds you safe from thorns

Of my blossomed love in the garden of my life.....

~ S ~


Scheme X X X A X A B A B X X X X B X
Poetic Form
Metre 110111011101 11111101 11100011110 1 11011110100 1111010111 01111010111111 1111010111 01101010100 111111111 010011111001001 111111111101 010101010111 1111111111 111010010111 1
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 673
Words 132
Sentences 10
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 34
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Submitted by sridevi_b on July 02, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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