Analysis of Mannequins Of Massachusetts



well i saw you at all the stores
staring at all the mannequins
you wanted to shop for shoes
but all i wanted to do was sit at home and smoke cannibus
you wanted to go to the salon
to get your nails done, well it's back to the lab again
i wanted your c*nt on my mattress so we can have mad sex
come on babe, come make me feel like a man again

well i called you at 2 in the afternoon
and you were feeling sad again
you were upset that your chihuahua
was again up to shenanigans
you were set on going to the museum today
didn't wanna, but i don't wanna make you mad again
i wanted the old you back like before when we met in college
come on babe, come make me feel like a man again

well i thought we were supposed to go bowling
but you just said you don't like the challenge
you said you just wanted to sit at home and play checkers
i'm more of a chess man and your skills are just average
i asked if you could cook me some sirlion steak
but you just shook your head and tossed me some sandwich breads
i wanted the woman i fell in love with when we first met
come on you lusty young lady in red, come make me feel like a man again


Scheme axxaxbxB xbxxxbcB xxxcxxxb
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 10110100 1101111 11110111111011 110111001 1111111110101 1101111110111111 111111110101 111110001 01010101 10011101 101110100 1011101001001 10101111011101 1100111101111010 111111110101 11110011110 1111111010 11111011110110 11101101111100 1111111111 1111110111101 110010110111111 1111011001111110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,104
Words 237
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 293
Words per stanza (avg) 79
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Submitted on July 18, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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