Analysis of Love In The Sun



Miss patel have you ever seen Sin?
The cynic Sun`s burning in sinning Sin?
The soft approach of Dawn;the trees at Fall?
Miss patel have you ever caught the sadness
of the falling dewdrops or the pleasure of
the Summer by the tip your virgin shawl?
Miss patel have you ever thought what would
happen to Kumar if you wouldn`t call?!
Heaven opens up;clouds after clouds fall
The prayers of the virgins can never be
bought or sold
Bottles of Champagne rattle in Rome
Roman ladies stood naked on he altar of Paul
River rushes midstream w/ yellow orgasms
Arti bites to bleed my lips in the ectasy of
love-lyrics;she cuts me dark and deep as she
rides me to her love aphrodisiac Dreams and
Sleep;her nipples stood erect like Himalayan
peaks as my love Paris` penetrating love
increased;Miss patel have you ever seen Sin?


Scheme AABCDBEBBFGHBIDFJKDA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 101111011 0101100101 010111111 10111101010 1010110101 0101011101 1011110111 101011111 101011011 0110101101 111 101011001 1010110111011 1010110010100 1111110011 111110111 11101010010 1101011010 111111001 101111011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 794
Words 150
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 655
Words per stanza (avg) 145
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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