Analysis of Liers



Sandy white beaches lie to my face,
Gritting their teeth.
Promising good times only
But I see through their beautiful disguise.
They are tarnished and deadly,
A watery grave.
A thousand lives expect not
What I saw that day.
A tragedy too cold
To even want to remember.
As the life of him drained away,
I'll never forget that day
When I floated in the sea.
It had tarnished, just like me.


Scheme ABCDCEFGHIGGCC
Poetic Form
Metre 101101111 1011 1001110 1111110001 1110010 01001 0101011 11111 010011 11011010 10111101 1100111 1110001 1110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 374
Words 72
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 304
Words per stanza (avg) 72
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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doodlegirl

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