Analysis of Let Me Win



Got my eyeballs on the prize.
If I lost it would hurt inside...
I want success as much as I breathe
Nothing is given, got to earn to recieve
I'm alergic to broke, noone want's a broken heart.
All I have is a heart that pumps so hard
I'm pumped up I'm motivated
Those stuck on stupid and lazyness
Just hate it.


Scheme ABCDEFGAH
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 11111101 110111111 1011011111 1111110101 1111011111 1111100 1111001 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 301
Words 62
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 236
Words per stanza (avg) 62
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Submitted on May 09, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jon Otano

The topics I write about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles I apply. I started writing poetry in high school in 05. I had written some poetry during class and showed some of my classmates who enjoyed it! I then was chosen to have my poetry in the school newspaper for each month! I done a lot of my work in the library. I met a woman who i showed my work to that worked there, and she said she knew a man that works on the radio! Then i was able to read two poems off the radio. A news reporter who appeared on the station as well decided to do a report on me and I've been writing ever sense. :) If Anybody want to friend request me on Facebook feel free too! Just look up Jon Otano I should be easy to find! :) more…

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