Analysis of Lemon Lemming Blues



Fluorescent bathed
In silent yellow gloom,
City buses march monochromic
Through the canvas of the night.
Shadow less lemon lemmings
Showing every hidden corner,
Every scratch and crack.,
Illuminated shames
Without a shadow.

City buses,
Like silent naked fish
Hunt impressionistic markings,
Among the neon brights.
Cobalts and Alizarins
Glide across thier shells.
With Cadmium only bathing ,
Excitement never clinging
The electric night eludes them
Leaves the Lemon Lemmings Blue


Scheme XXAXBXAXX XXBBBXAAXX
Poetic Form
Metre 101 010101 101011 1010101 111010 101001010 100101 01001 0101 1010 110101 1001010 010101 101 101101 11001010 0101010 00101011 1010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 460
Words 70
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 9, 10
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 199
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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