Analysis of Leaving Jas's World



Can I look now without blinking
now that you are gone
Before it was no matter of choice
caught like a first breath
Gasping with fear and awe
Believing without you near
I would wither and fall
The wonder of entering your space
your secret closeted door
where you created a private Narnia
Cast yourself as Aslan and at your feet watched me fall
Extracting my soul as any god does
I could not- would not resist your allure
yet you could not let me know I mattered to you


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Poetic Form
Metre 11110110 11111 011111011 11011 101101 0100111 111001 010110011 1101001 110100101 101110111111 0101111011 1111101101 111111111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 454
Words 90
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 377
Words per stanza (avg) 90
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Submitted on January 13, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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