Analysis of Labonee



Labonee and me dream and drinks
Holding each other tethered and tricked
beneath the shawl of late night love lights
Labonee and me seize and see love seasonal
greetings w/ our love liQuefying lips!
We melt, we mix the Urn of love lava with
our turns, twists
Labonee flies, labonee swims, labonee falls
labonee fleets, feeling the pangs of pleasure
betwix her feet!
I move in her as one beat
She takes me away, far, far, away, beyond the
barriers of all pain and pretence
And O there she sits me; and make me eats
her apples, cherry, champagne
I become immortal, I become immortal
I become so sweet sleepy, so sweet numb
She takes me in her arms, and I lie there
forever multiplying love numbers; gardening
Prem & Pleasure in her fun-fed-funnicle fern


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJJKALMDNOPQ
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Metre 101101 101101001 010111111 1011011100 1010010111 11110111101 1011 111111 111001110 101 1100111 111011101010 10011101 0111110111 0101001 101010101010 1011110111 1110010111 010100110100 110001111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 731
Words 135
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 594
Words per stanza (avg) 135
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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