Analysis of Inside the Rose



Go inside a rose.
Fall into the velvet blanket of memories.
Let someone else fall onto the thorn.
Or down the stem of truth.
I am happy where I lay.
From the outside a ray of perfection.
No one knows the secrets within.
I wither from the core of love.
Even though I seem to share beauty.
Even though a dozen dies in a day.
The rose stands frozen.
Sleek and slender.
A snob to the daisy below.
Where the rose has arms of envy.
A seed could only dream.
I have seen the glisten of morning's dew.
The stem broken, and cut with a blade.
So perhaps I'm not so enchanting as you think.
The petals of life, pulled from their breath.
And wilted away like never there in the first place.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIEFJKILMNOPQ
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10101 101010101100 11111001 110111 1110111 1011011010 11101001 11010111 101111110 1010101001 01110 1010 01101001 10111110 011101 1110101101 011001101 101111010111 010111111 0100111010011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 658
Words 133
Sentences 20
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 521
Words per stanza (avg) 133
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Submitted on September 16, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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