Analysis of In My Mind's Eye

Kathy A. Wittman 1949 (Tennessee)



I can see in my mind's eye
the old homeplace at Husky's Grove,
its unpretentious, weathered planks
sturdy amidst life's tumultuous storms.
I can hear the wind whistling
through those dense, primeval forests
during the harsh Appalachian winters
endured by my stalwart ancestors.
I can taste crystal Spring water,
ice-cold and delicious on my tongue,
easily accessible, free to mountaineers
who called Husky's Grove their home.
I can smell the sweet savor
of lush, ripened peaches, preserved
in unadorned, sparkling mason jars,
stored in dank cellars as treasures.
I can feel the triumphant joy
of my great-grandmother as she
snuggled her beloved first-born child,
my grandfather, against her full breast.


Scheme ABCDEFGGHIJKHLMGNOPQ
Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
Metre 1110111 0111101 1010101 100111001 1110110 11101010 100101010 01111010 11110110 110010111 10001001110 1110111 1110110 11101001 00110101 10110110 11100101 1111011 1001111 11001011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 684
Words 110
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 570
Words per stanza (avg) 110
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Kathy A. Wittman

I am a retired college teacher. In the past, I taught classes in Education, English, and Psychology. At present, I am focused on developing my potential as an artist and writer. I have self-published books in the genres of autobiography, fiction, and poetry. I have a Bachelor's Degree in English from the University of Tennessee (1972), a Master's Degree in Educational Psychology from the University of Tennessee (1983), and a Doctoral Degree in Educational Foundations from the University of Wyoming (1988). I have taken numerous college classes in Art and Creative Writing over the past decade. I completed an Associate Degree in Art from the Laramie County Community College (Cheyenne, Wyoming) in 2018, and I completed a Bachelor's Degree in Art from the University of Wyoming (Laramie, Wyoming) in 2020. I consider myself to be a "Life-long Learner". more…

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