Analysis of Imperceptibly
Deep in the element of me, coursing through my veins, permeating every part of my body is a deadly kind of vulnerability.
An old but alien thing that has drained me of all my spirituality,
While I am not empty, it tempts me to think so.
It forces me to act silly and impulsively when relating to people that I love, and who loves me.
Readily I alienate everybody with caustic words and malicious silence, convincing myself I could not care.
Rather I do not, but inexplicably and sneakily, it bothers me exponentially.
I walk around defensively, ready for that next perceived onslaught.
Foolishly anticipating a confrontation, and loving the victory over everyone, as they are all inferior to me;
Incapable of anything thoughtful, intelligent, or different—husks of a single entity.
They peeve the hell in me.
And Jesus…well he’s never here, and his absence immobilizes, yet empowers me to monumental depravity.
Are curses and blessings the things that determines destiny?
Am I to blame for the shackles that attempt to bury me?
Can I run to another world and be free of my spiritual deficiency?
What of this foreign body is there no inoculation that permanently rids me of this malady?
I feel dazed, and I am without knowledge.
Because, like an incorrigible child, I do the same thing over and repeatedly—hate, and offend; hate and offend; run away, and cry; run away and cry.
Then lie, lie, lie, and lie.
I am unspeakably tired.
Can somebody save me, or do I have to want to be saved, by somebody?
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Metre | 10010011101111001001111010101100100 1111001111111100100 111110111111 110111100010010101101110111 100110100110100101001011111 10111101000111010100 1101010010111011 10001000010010010010101111010011 0100110100100110011010100 110101 01011101011011010110100100 110010011010100 111110101011101 111101010111110000100 11110101110010110001111100 1110110110 0111010001110111000100100110011010110101 111101 11110 11011111111111110 |
Characters | 1,487 |
Words | 261 |
Sentences | 18 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 20 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 59 |
Words per line (avg) | 13 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,187 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 261 |
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Submitted on May 01, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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