Analysis of ice on the wire



icicles teardropped on the telephone wire-
varnished with its translucent tapered coat

delicately sheathed to its descending arch
it sways from pole to pole - highwire to wire

conformed to the stitching of the studded rain
tightroped to the felted snow –

braided and strewn to admire
like winter's necklace briefly worn

with one eyelash brushed /a fragment
of a fractured second /fragile chains of frozen coils

shivered and broke its tempered hold
/drapes of shards sliced through the pillowed sky

and formed a threshold on the sojourned road-
impaled pieces of miniscule prisms shattered and splayed

then suddenly swept by the wind's deliberate gust
- like an eagle swooping for it's destined prey

reminiscent of a poet's verse- momentarily
balanced on the wire - befallen to nature's dust.


Scheme AB XA XX XX XX XX XB CX XC
Poetic Form
Metre 1001101010 1011010101 10001110101 1111111110 01101010101 11011 1001101 11010101 1111010 1010101011101 10011101 11111011 01011011 01101100101001 1100110101001 11101011101 010101010100 1010100101101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 776
Words 129
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 72
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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i once read a poem by neruda, and it touched me to a point that propoelled my interest. and then i read althuzer by vicente huidobro whereby a man parachuted from the sky and the world unfolded into his poetic epic and it took me to a different place different from my ignorant geography of poetry. but then jorge luis borges blew my mind and made poetry not only about truth but utter sublime fiction amidst an exploded horizon- boundless literature off a free falling cliff and the only thing to do was grow wings in midair and take the ride. more…

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