Analysis of I Wonder Why



Shaking, trembling.
My hands would hardly move...
Looking, searching,
Longing to hold my pen,
My hands just wouldn't reach it...
I looked down into myself, eyes barely opened
I couldn't see any reason...
So I tried to concentrate
Eyes dripping wet, wildly opened
I looked again, real deeper this time
As if maybe a lie would show
But the view was already too clear
No cause could be found...
I stood up hoping to attain that pen of mine
The one that's able to talk and tell
When unspoken words just wouldn't reveal themselves
And what a surprise!
My pen had already spoken
When my body, tired of standing,
Had already rested and fallen into profound sleep...


Scheme ABACDEFGEHIJKLMNOFAP
Poetic Form Tetractys  (35%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 10100 111101 1010 101111 1111011 11101111010 11011010 111110 11011010 110111011 11100111 101101011 11111 111101011111 011101101 101011100101 01001 11101010 111010110 10101001001011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 639
Words 117
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 512
Words per stanza (avg) 117
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Pamela Maalouf

Born in 1987 in Zahle - Lebanon, Pamela Maalouf started writing at the age of 11 years old.Among her many hobbies, writing has always been considered as her priority! She writes in different languages: Arabic, english and french. She also speaks Spanish and is now learning Chinese.Following her brother's death in 2007, she wrote a very emotional book about him in 2008, showing a true image about her brother, her family and her deep sadness caused by her big loss...Pamela Maalouf got her Masters in Translation in 2008 and is now studying Interpretation at USEK - Lebanon. She has been to several countries and worked abroad and is now working in Lebanon in translation with various agencies and businessmen.A poet, writer, pianist, translator and soon to be interpreter, Pamela Maalouf hides very deep emotions that can only be expressed via writing...PAMELA MAALOUF more…

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