Analysis of I don't Mind Making It



New love comes as heartache goes
pain is not too bad,
What I felt about my love
was worth the hurt I had.

Sad and gloomy for a while
days went by so fast,
Then as night time fell on me
I thought my life had passed.

Your sweet smile lit up my life
so warm was your kiss,
When alone I miss you so
with you my life is bliss.

Now I see the dawn again
where the dark did fade,
Then as I get out of bed
 all of it needs made.

Bobby Ferguson 23/08/2014.


Scheme XAXA XBXB XCXC XDXD X
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 11111 1110111 110111 1010101 11111 1111111 111111 1111111 11111 1011111 111111 1110101 10111 1111111 11111 10100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 430
Words 97
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on December 01, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Bobby Ferguson

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