Analysis of I can't stop cry Lord I'm hurt so bad



I do alot of cry all the time.
I cry myself to sleep last
night.I got so much problems
on my hand and i can't take it.
I know people don't like me.
I love you so much and you
only one I had to help me
but it look like you didn't
want to help me know more.When i
touch your hand you didn't
want to touch me back and
that hurt
so much.Why can't I stop
hurt.My life,every got good for
me but the day you walk in
my life it was so great but
you are not may i wish you was
mine.


Scheme ABCDEFEGHGIJKLMNOP
Poetic Form
Metre 110111101 111111 111110 11101111 1110111 1111101 10111111 1111110 1111111 111110 111110 11 11111 11111 1101110 1111111 11111111 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 456
Words 111
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 354
Words per stanza (avg) 106
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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