Analysis of I can't go to sleep



I'm lay in my bed
thinking about you
all night long.
I have not got
no sleep.I was cry
but my tears dry up
on my face.I love you
so much I'm so crazy
about you.Do you want
her in your life? I
will never let you go
so help me God.I'm
going keep hold on to
you maybe I'm crazy
some people think I'm.
You and me are in this
for life stil end.
I will never give up
on you and i hope you
don't give up on me.


Scheme ABCDEFBGHEIJBGJKLFBG
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 11011 10011 111 1111 1111 11111 11111 111110 01111 00111 110111 1111 101111 110110 11011 101101 1111 111011 110111 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 384
Words 95
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 298
Words per stanza (avg) 91
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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