Analysis of I built a fire



I built a fire
Dancing there it was
No one to join me, 
I savored the fires presence
alone

Nobody
but the flames and me

While the fire crackles
Joyfully devouring
Magazines
They sit oblivious
And discuss god.

Can't you see?
God's in here with me
Eating those articles
With the utmost joy
Bringing back memories
In the greatest of hope
That waft in with the crimson
Smell of smoke


Scheme XXAXX AA BXXXX AABXXXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (35%)
Metre 11010 10111 11111 11001010 01 1 10101 101010 1000100 10 110100 0011 111 10111 101100 1011 101100 001011 1101010 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 362
Words 70
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 2, 5, 8
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on April 10, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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skitheeast

Hey, some of these aren't that great but what the heck. I just like writing how I feel in the moment so some of my poems might be confusing because I was confused in that moment. Maybe thats why I wanted to write a poem, to sort out my thoughts. Anyway, just read them and hopefully just one of them will bring you some kind of joy, or make you feel some kind of connection. Peace.>>>I also do star photography - probably why space works its way into a lot of my writing. http://mcb-photography.blogspot.com/ more…

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