Analysis of Hold to my words



Hold to my words

I lost in this forgotton world

no one can be saved

One road to another place

no where to go

So we cry ourself to sleep

Hold ourself when we are cold

We don't understand the feelings

When they are gone to join

The others waiting above

Calling them home

We tell friends but they don't know

How dear they parents are to them

Hold to my words

You never know

When you will miss them

When you get called home

Forever in memoies

Forever in mind

I pray to my keeper

I lay my head down

To see tomorrow morning sun light

Not the forever darken nights instand


Scheme A b x x c x x x x x d c e A c e d a x x x x b
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 110111 11111 1110101 1111 11100111 10011111 1101010 111111 0101001 1011 1111111 11110111 1111 1101 11111 11111 01001 01001 111110 11111 11011011 100101011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 591
Words 121
Sentences 1
Stanzas 23
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 20
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Submitted on July 03, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ishmael Balfour

I started to read poems when I was 10 years old and was liking writing poems each day. Years later my mom was happy and glad I was writing small books and poems but sadly I lost her when I was only 15 years old and Remember's Day was the day she passed. Since then it has been two years and I wanted to make a poem group on facebook so I did. Couple months went by and my school started a poem group too so I joined. Friends and teachers told me I made amazing poems couple of my friend said they cried and so did some of teachers too. I kept on writing poems and get 14 followers in my poem group but I wanted more. Now I'm here posting my poems to the world all because of friends, family and teachers for being there for me. Thank you all :) more…

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