Analysis of Green Eyes



My fare lover tell me what was undercover
A friend am I or figure of a mother
To me it could never to be of brother
For closer then friends and closer lovers

What lies under those green eyes?

If only when I can run my fingers
Along your skin, feelings of love do linger
What emotions can you truly bring her
To you, who was, could you leave her

Question of "whys" to these silent sighs

Do you 'gret or call from a simple mistake
Knowing with me all from love to be at stake
If only the past we could fix and future's make
A yearning for more love at its wake

A never-ending goodbye with those green eyes


Scheme AAAB C BAAA C DDDD C
Poetic Form
Metre 11101111010 01111101010 11111011110 1101101010 1110111 1101111110 01111011110 1010111010 11111110 101111101 11111101001 10111111111 110011110101 010111111 0101011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 589
Words 121
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 1, 4, 1, 4, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on April 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Syrelia

I believe that there is a time for everything and some things can be expressed through poetry I come from a different family and things are different everywhere. I believe poems can be gateways into the mind, what we cannot say but wish to say it anyway so badly and so words change but the meaning will forever stay the same.I write as my hands allow me, word after word. Ink following the shadows of my paper begging me silently to write more.These are my poems. more…

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