Analysis of Going Out



Close the door behind you when you leave
and turn the key.
I shall stay here
in the dark
for a while.
Or maybe a little longer.
I'll put my thoughts
in a small wooden box by the fire
and watch the flames
as they curl over
the three bars.
When you come back
I will be waiting.
Nothing will have changed
except for the small pile of ash
in the chair by the window
where you left me.


Scheme ABCDEFGFHFIJKLMNB
Poetic Form
Metre 101011111 0101 1111 001 101 11001010 1111 0011011010 0101 11110 011 1111 11110 10111 01101111 0011010 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 364
Words 79
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 295
Words per stanza (avg) 79
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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