Analysis of God's Child



I am feeling ferocious pain
Clenching my heart
Then reaching my brain
When the whys have disappeared
As the truth I have found
From the core of my sorrows
That was hidden in the dark
Engulfing a sulking child
Crying for a hand
That's nowhere to be found
Except the brutal light
From the mouth of mockers
Or the poisonous arrows
From the conceited disdainful eyes
Compelling him to yell
What I have done
Why it has become like this
But he couldn't find the answers
For he hears the echoes of screams
Of his insane kin
In an unsafe valley
Soon be flooded by the fierce waves
That will take him away
In a bottomless pit
And turn him frantic and afraid
But none commiserated over the years
And left him away
With the inhabitants of the dark
Ardently trying to pull him in
While he clenched the chains of hope
Of being the recipient of His grace
That transformed into a wish
With a belief that he would realize
For this pain will subside
In a passionate boy
Striving hard for that wish
To rise and climb
And witness the crimson sky
Harbouring the friendly clouds
Coalescing the water till they fall
With the gentle rays of a novel sunrise


Scheme ABACDEFGHDIEEJKLMNOPQRSTUVSFPWXYJZ1 Y2 3 4 5 J
Poetic Form
Metre 11100101 111 11011 101101 101111 1011110 1110001 0100101 10101 11111 010101 10111 1010010 100100101 010111 1111 1110111 11101010 11101011 11011 010110 11101011 111101 001001 01110001 1111001 01101 100100101 100101110 1110111 11000100111 1010101 100111110 111101 001001 101111 1101 0100101 10101 010010111 1010110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,107
Words 214
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 41
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 920
Words per stanza (avg) 212
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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