Analysis of gently apply censure



voices of reason require dull plugs
accept no commotion from liberal mugs
look at that hole issuing cries,
spilling effective advice
SHUT IT UP!!!

our dream world is perfect
avoiding complaints is effective, it's working!
let's all maintain the order of things,
enjoy your delicate drinks
of silence and 'moderation'!
it's ok to clap

Official notice: guideline approves of ovation

in order to piss off the logic of all
we're posting the good, or nothing at all! :)
who cares about your petty complaints?
yeah-yeah-yeah! it poors when it rains...
the 'zero' of pains from phantomous jerks?
still, don't fix a thing that (somehow) still works
and smile, you bastards, just smile!
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on a personal note, in a films of the forties
i've seen such a censure and its rigor mortis
silence of truth - societal vermin
didn't get much of what was said,

narration was in german...

dedicated to all masters of a system that shows obvious signs disease
and their failure to show character despite numerous callings


Scheme AAXXX XXXXBX B CCXXDDX EXXX B EA
Poetic Form
Metre 101101011 01101011001 11111001 1001001 111 1011101 010011010110 110101011 0111001 1100010 11111 010101011010 01011101011 1100111011 110111001 11111111 01011111 111011111 0111011 1 1010010011010 111010011010 1011010010 10111111 0101010 10001110101011100101 011011100011001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 992
Words 172
Sentences 13
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 1, 8, 4, 1, 2
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Didar Baizhanov

Somewhere between my birth in the land-locked nation of Kazakhstan and becoming U.S. Merchant Marine officer - poetry became something of a satellite in my travels through life ;) ____________________ My most sincere Thank You! for the feedback! ____________________ Here are some poems that I liked (here on Lulu), please give appropriate authors your comments if you get a chance:- October Hearts by PoetryofJune - High(Coup) by JayS (haiku) - Tranquility by Beccanine - Nemesis by Timothy Francis Savage - My Bright Place by Zenocyde - I Fought in a War by Justin R Esplin (haiku) - Love Blooms by Dee Edgett - A Haiku: Violin Music by Clara B. Ray - Cigarettes by faustus - Implode by Elise Hadden - Haiku: Violet Roses by PoetryofJune - The Friend I Didn't Want - Ryan Wong :) - Plus Infinity by Neli Fatu de Valahia - Never Good; Never Bad by Graham Geiger - Two Snowflakes by Kiran - With a grey sky by Spirals - Pine Needles by Matthew Lerette - Bound Again by Danny Warren Patterson - Lie-F by RomanoJohnson - A Child's Memory of a War by Change - A Cold November Day by Bonchance - El espejo roto (The Broken Mirror) by Taqua-------------------------------- more…

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