Analysis of Garden



When we talked about the world

we were talking about order:

a trail of grass, a fist of blooms.

My mother points at a slow

and deliberate fall of the full fruit.

“When we are dying,” she says

“when we are long gone and dead,”

And it is so easy to pretend we had a world

of choice. A green, easy tending.

The orchids tenaciously

cling to their dark barks.

We talked straight into evening,

straight into each tangled tendril

angled against dark, into dark.

If we could only hold the edgeless

in place. Night and its reckless weeds.

The light was not ours to give.


Scheme A X B C X X X A D X X D C X B X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110101 10100110 01110111 1101101 0010011011 1111011 1111101 0111101011101 11011010 0100100 11111 1110110 1011101 10011011 11110101 01101101 01111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 553
Words 108
Sentences 10
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 26
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on April 13, 2023

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