Analysis of folon




In the  past  as i walked with my heart bruised
I  smile while drop of blood make its way from my eyes.
in the past,words were only spoken to protect the elders
while  blame was placed on the child.
in the past ,happiness was only for the elders
 while child  die of depression
in the past, rape victims were guilty sinners
while the guilty elder man points his finger at the child
in  the past  if only they  knew the pain of the child


Scheme ABCDCECDD
Poetic Form Nonet (22%)
Metre 0011111111 111111111111 00101010101010 1111101 0011001101010 1111010 00111001010 10101011110101 0011101101101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 428
Words 85
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 339
Words per stanza (avg) 92
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Submitted on September 30, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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