Analysis of Flame!



Smoldering, insentient heat
Burning, blazing orange coal under feet
A heart skipping to an unheard beat
Mixing, entwining, twirling in sheets
Cheek to cheek, flesh mixed with sticky
Body heat!
A mind trying but finding it so hard to speak
Red, pulsating, fiery hot
Brown thigh to brown thigh the right spot!
A sound on the wind, a sudden stop
Racking spasms an insatiable spot!
Matter to matter a great play
Blues to jazz on the same day
A satisfaction so profound I can only say
Flame!

3 March 2010


Scheme AAAXXAXBBXBCCCX X
Poetic Form
Metre 10011 1010101101 011011011 1011001 11111110 101 011011011111 1101001 11111011 011010101 1010101001 10110011 1111011 001010111101 1 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 484
Words 90
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 15, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 199
Words per stanza (avg) 45
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Modified on April 01, 2023

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Poetry is what makes me whole and keeps me sane all at the same time. You are born a poet, a storyteller, it is a part of what you are, a great gift from God. You can be taught to put words on paper, only those with a poet's Soul can make you feel those words deeply! I hope all of you feel me. :-) more…

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