Analysis of far away



and now we might be apart
and somehow you are so far
but still you are,
found there in my heart

it makes me afraid
that i might not see you again..
it makes me scared
to know that you're no longer there.

destiny and fate....
decide the path of love and hate
and once we fall in love,
destiny decides it's too late.
something must happen and stumble our way..
something must happen to take you away.

not sure if i'm bad luck
or i sound lame...
whenever i take a step forward..
i hesitate and fail !!

i just fell for you..
and i have no clue
for you to assume
except,my love is due

i don't know why?
you're not meant to be with me forever !!
after all the time we spent togethor!!!!
now that you are away from my sight..
 i still promise to walk for you in miles
just to come and say hi!

that feeling i get when i talk to you..
p*ss the best ever and the most amusing too..
it makes me happy and even happier when i get to see you!!

you asked to see me ...and i promise i will let you
you complained me and said " i like you"
but what did you mean by that?
it was such a confuse!!
do you like me?! i swear i do too..
if only it could be real..that you do..
i would scream out loud and say I DO !
i will wait again ..as am always used to.
maybe somehing new will turn out
and maybe that dream would come true..


Scheme ABBA XXXX CCXCDD XXXX EEXE FXBXXF EEE EEXXEEEEXE
Poetic Form
Metre 0111101 011111 1111 11011 11101 11111101 1111 11111101 10001 1011101 011101 1001111 10110010101 1011011101 111111 1111 010110110 11001 11111 01111 11101 1111 1111 1111111010 10101111 111101111 1110111101 111011 1101111111 1101100010101 11110010100111111 1111101101111 101101111 1111111 111001 111111111 110111111 111110111 1110111111 1011111 01011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,268
Words 272
Sentences 30
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 6, 4, 4, 6, 3, 10
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 121
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:22 min read
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Nadine M.oraby

heyoo !! am Nadine !! an 18 year old egyptian girl!! =D i'm a ballerina,a guitarist and a writer :Dwell actually writing is a hobby..am not really A professional writer but my friends like my poems and think am really talented :) !! so i decided to post my poems here on that site to see your comment about my poems>>>some let me down and some encouraged me to continue writing and correct my mistakes :D thats really great to learn from the greatest poets !! =D i love photography too!! well,i hope you would read my poems and tell me what you think :) dont worry ,i dont bite :-p more…

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