You



most of them think that you are not cute,
they say that you are silly and probably a fool
but I,
have a diffrent opinion though,
i think you are attractive and cute...
not because i'm attracted to your face or body,
but because i'm attracted to the kindness in you.

i like your both sides..
the wise side and the funny side too :)
i believe you are handsome and strong.
not because your hair is gorgeous or your eyes are blue,
but because your personality is cheerful and pure..
because i respect your mind and your attitude
because i like your forgivness and your thoughts

To me , you are really sweet and cool
not because you try to show of or wear nice clothes
but because you face your problems and you were never rude.
because you know how to treat a girl and how to compliment her too

you are amazing and wonderful
not because i only think of you like that,
but because you are an idol and you do everything by a proof
because you are humanitarian and from the things that you refuse:
bullying and human or animal abuse.

everything you say is effective and true,
not because you know everything,
but because i trust you.
However,the stars are beautiful,
they can never make us not notice the moon!

that's not only about you,
sometimes you are just like a mistery
and we need to read your character by a hint or a clue..
but mostly you are easily read,and your mind speaks too.

your silence,is what attracts me more to you.
not because of your pride or your EGO,
but because you prefer to listen and understand more.
and because silence is the best answer to a fool.

you are experienced and you know.
because you have faced alot of problems and you made mistakes too.
but you believe that you learn lessons from every mistake for sure

all of these things make me really want you..!!
because you care and because of everything you do!
because you have never tried to change
and you always prefer to be you !!
IT IS THE REAL YOU THAT MAKES ME LOVE YOU !
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

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Scheme ABXCAXD XDXDEFX BXFD GXXXX DXDGX DEDD DCXB CDE DDXDD
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,913
Words 370
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 4, 5, 5, 4, 4, 3, 5

Nadine M.oraby

heyoo !! am Nadine !! an 18 year old egyptian girl!! =D i'm a ballerina,a guitarist and a writer :Dwell actually writing is a hobby..am not really A professional writer but my friends like my poems and think am really talented :) !! so i decided to post my poems here on that site to see your comment about my poems>>>some let me down and some encouraged me to continue writing and correct my mistakes :D thats really great to learn from the greatest poets !! =D i love photography too!! well,i hope you would read my poems and tell me what you think :) dont worry ,i dont bite :-p more…

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  • dhubsbfxdgfnh
    this is a beautiful piece of art and loving someone is gorgeous, this almost made me cry when you talked about the blue eyes because this is how i felt about my ex, and on top of that he had blue eyes, your writing is amazing, keep it up. 
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