Analysis of Fall and tide



Tears just dropped
As I had totally flopped
At large scale on each front
Only to repent and bear the brunt

On life's platter
What to utter?
It is tragic
Without any basic

I have nothing to claim as credit
Everything goes on side of the debit
Not a single instance I can cite
As if holy one to recite

What did I give her?
Except pain to bother
Never took her seriously
Harassed and caused shocks mentally

How come people say bluntly?
“Life is like two wheels” fluently
When they observe no norms
Live life like insects and worms

What did I do to justify?
My association to simplify
The living style to suit our need
Except hunt towards greed

She stood by the side
As if to witness areas very wide
Right from marriage life to social obligation
She did right thing for holy relation

I sit under tree and hear melody
She was not ordinary or somebody
But as an integral part of life crusade
I simple made cruel joke and took it as trade

It can be termed as cry in wilderness
Not to be linked to an ideal face
It might have not represented sunny side
Yet to show the world on the side of fall and tide


Scheme AABB CCDD XXEE CCFF FFXX GGHH IIJJ FFKK XXII
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 111 1111001 111111 101010101 1110 1110 1110 011010 111011110 101111010 101010111 11101101 11110 011110 10101000 01011100 1110110 11111100 110111 111101 1111110 10010110 010111101 011011 11101 11110100101 11101110010 1111110010 1110101100 111100110 11110011101 110110101111 1111110100 111111011 1111010101 111011011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,064
Words 213
Sentences 5
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on March 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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