Analysis of Factory Boi



Welcome to the Nine-to-Five
Hourly Daily, what a grind

300 b!tches, factory floor
Eyes fixed on you, soul through, bore
Machines a-sewin' - NOISY ROARRRRR!!!

Lunch time, car park, gettin' stoned
Locked inside your *"Safety Zone"
Angels' blarin' 'Face To Face'
Man...... "I Gotta - Get Outta This Place"

Factory Foreman, Mister Strodgenyk
New girls, Always had his pick
Black Porsche drivin', what a d*ck!

Ludi's Palace, Ostentatious
Opera House knock off, Goodness Gracious
Cool, calm collected, what a show
Called Compensating, pssssst...... "down low"

Ludi, had to face the facts
Damage done on 'Perfect Match'
What a package, (he) had the goods
Well, so he thought, his dazzling looks

Questions answered carefully
Based on PERSONALITY
hmphhh.... Stupid b!tch -
She NOT pick ME ???????

*EJ Holden
"locked inside your safety zone" -
From 'Mr Damage' by The Angels
The cassette came with the car

RIP "Doc" (Neeson)


Scheme XX AAA XBCC DDD EEFF XXXX GGFG HBXX H
Poetic Form
Metre 1010111 1010101 11001 1111111 0101101 111111 1011101 101111 111011011 10010101 111111 11011011 110010 101111010 11010101 1100111 111101 1011011 10101101 111111001 1010100 110100 1101 1111 110 1011101 110101010 0011101 1110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 897
Words 151
Sentences 9
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 4, 3, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on August 20, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Dana Moon

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