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If I Had A Better Mind (For Simone Levi)

Dana Moon

If I had a better mind
My brain would, know how, think
If I had a better mind
The dishes, not pile, sink
If I had a better mind
I wouldn't need a shrink
If I had a better mind
My poems wouldn't STINK!!!

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Miss you Simone (Simone Levi)
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Submitted on August 21, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AbAbAbAb ax
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 267
Words 57
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 2
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