Analysis of Even In Death



Mine be the sign of enchanted life
Free from will, and all matters of strife!
Less I be in as much, as a humble man
Then to walk with thine heart, in open hand

This be thy moment of my missed contempt
And I’ll be thy beacon, of my own relent
Conflict lies in my quill! Late in the night
Where now I do rest, burdened by plight

Have thine own eyes, been blinded by sleet
Earth for my pillow, no slip for my feet!
Thou have turned thy heart into dust
Lost in thy depths, consumed by my lust

Turmoil breeds by the whims of my breath
Thou hath, endeared me, even in death!
Dead as I am, in turn do I crust?
Alone in thy paster, burdened by lust!

Deem be thy day, in my disarray
Beside still waters, bound in the bay
Vexed as I am, by the bow of my string
Ever so humbled by the light, which I bring!


Scheme AAXX XXBB CCDD EEDD FFGG
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 110110101 111011011 11101110101 1111110101 1111011101 01111011101 1010111001 111111011 111111011 1111011111 11111011 101101111 11101111 110111001 111101111 0101101011 11110101 011101001 1111101111 10110101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 778
Words 164
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Darryn John Murphy

Darryn John MurphyPlace Of Birth: Takapuna Auckland Date Of Birth: 23 November 1970 Country: New Zealand City: Christchurch Distinguished Member: New Zealand Society of AuthorsMy BooksTitle: Reflections of the Heart Author : Darryn John Murphy ISBN 13: 978-1-877479-28-1 ISBN 10: 1877479284 192 pages 20cm x 14cm soft cover Published First Edition PublishersIn Reflections of the Heart. Darryn shares his honest and sincere approach in celebrating the most important thing in life – Love.http://poetrybydjm.co.nz/Reflections_Of_the_Heart.htmlMy New Book: Moonlight Echoes SunriseTitle: Moonlight Echoes Sunrise Author : Darryn John Murphy Library of congress number : 2010912795 ISBN : 978-1-4535-5500-2 ISBN13: 978-1-4535-5500-2 Pages: 322 Size: 6x9 Soft cover: PaperbackIn Moonlight Echoes Sunrise, you will discover A beautiful collection of candid and openhearted poems That truly celebrates the endeavours of the human spirit!http://poetrybydjm.co.nz/bookmoonlightechoessunrise.htmlOnline Storeshttp://www.amazon.com/Moonlight-Echoes-Sunrise-Darryn-Murphy/dp/1453555005http://www.amazon.co.uk/Moonlight-Echoes-Sunrise-Darryn-Murphy/dp/1453555005http://www.whitcoulls.co.nz/book/moonlight-echoes-sunrise/13833892/http://usedmarketplace.borders.com/search/books/isbn/1453555005http://search.barnesandnoble.com/books/product.aspx?ISBN=1453555005http://www.bookdepository.co.uk/book/9781453555002/Moonlight-Echoes-Sunrisehttp://www.whsmith.co.uk/CatalogAndSearch/ProductDetails.aspx?productID=9781453555002http://www.emporiumbooks.com.au/book/moonlight-echoes-sunrise.doI also have two sites where my work can be viewed and purchased http://poetrybydjm.co.nz and http://www. inspirationalwritings.co.nz.My New Poetry Site: Poetrybydjm.co.nzYou will discover a beautiful selection of love poems, inspirational poems, nature poems, sad poems, friendship poems, children poems, sonnets, haiku, terza rima poems, triolet poems, quotes, and more!http://poetrybydjm.co.nz/index.htmlThou Hath - SonnetThou hath, belittled me And I have lived in humility Thou hath, besieged me And I have walked with stability Thou hath, nurtured me And I have marched through adversity Thou hath, loved me And I have witnessed diversity Thou hath, betrayed me And I have bathed! In my purity Thou hath, conquered me And I've walked, through obscurity Thine own heart, has felt such pleasure Beautiful soul, I adorn your treasure! more…

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