Analysis of Empty




Empty….
I gave you so much.
 I gave you my life.
 I gave you my all,
 and now there's not nothing left in me to give.

You took my core,
 then shredded it into pieces with your bare hands.
 Now I'm deteriorating at a distance,
 and don't know how to pick up the pieces.


Scheme XXXXX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10 11111 11111 11111 01111010111 1111 110101101111 11010001010 0111111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 263
Words 54
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 5, 4
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on August 21, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Diane JacksonBaul

I use poetry to release my inner most deep feelings. Poetry is my outlet to all. Its my therapy, for all that I have gone through and gonna go through.. A place where I'm able to say what I want. Whether criticized or agreed upon. Somewhere I can totally let down my hair. Think as I wish, Think as I can. Somewhere i can be me, and not care who knows, or sees me. No judgement, complete freedom to be me. more…

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