Analysis of Elemental Memoir




A fathomless mystic charade
How alluring its serenade
Witness nature's own masquerade
Mystique that cannot be portrayed
An entity most have betrayed
A spirit that must be obeyed
Awakened reflected cascade

Diaphanous and chaotic
Performance beyond hypnotic
Earth's coryphée of erotic
Mistaken to be quixotic
A creature forcing psychotic
Its soul the purest narcotic
Intimate of all aquatic

Enigmatical their affair
Foxtrot brimming with debonair
Elementally torn despair
Amaurotic and unaware
Of essence's lifeblood they share
Their fable ready to ensnare
Romance between water and air


Scheme AAAAAAA BBBBBBB CCCCCCC
Poetic Form
Metre 011001 1010101 1010101 01110101 11001101 01011101 01001001 01000010 01001010 1111010 01011010 0101010 11010010 10011010 1101 1010101 1101 1001 11111 11010101 01011001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 565
Words 86
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 165
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted on March 01, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jillian Veitenheimer

My writing is a way for things to flow out of me that I didn't even know was within me. By sharing it with all the other poets out there I can rebuild my strength in myself. I can free my soul and let it soar in the stars. Let the wind rip me free of the being that carries my emotions. Poetry is my heart beat. more…

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